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A Special Being

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Consciousness provides for the lessons of existence. Some allow. Some don’t.

Sunday, July 11, 2021


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A Special Being


How mental the concept,
this birth and death distinction.

Existence is neither created or destroyed,
defiled nor immaculate,
increased nor decreased,
coming nor going,
one nor many.

All merely concepts.

Thus, he saw the true nature of all things,
that there was neither full nor empty,
birth nor death,
becoming nor dissolving.

Standing at the seashore,
he watched the waves rise and fall.
and like the blue water
frothing atop the sea,
he witnessed birthlessness
and deathlessness.

For like the waves,
be they long and short,
high or low,
waves rose and fell,
but the water remained.

His mind recorded
that without water,
there could be no waves.

 
Waves returned to water.
Waves once water.
Water once waves.

He breathed in as the frothy crest rose,
then exhaled as they passed away,
understanding water and waves as one,
transcending man’s notion
of birth and death,
worry, fear or suffering.

Contemplating the wondrous nature of his epiphany,
he knew such wisdom was liberation from all fear,
worry and suffering.

Being finally beyond
the world of birth and death,
he smiled and strode off.

Such was this special being.



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Reviewed by Corrine Ardoin
Reviewed on July 15, 2021
What an incredible poem! Beautiful! A higher state of consciousness into timeless being. Timelessness, where there is no past and no future, only the ever-present Now. Deep stuff. You have written a truly awesome poem. Thank you for this gift!

Reviewed on July 11, 2021
Yes! I "saw" your words perfectly and when that wave was cresting, you teased the readers a bit, didn't you? It was like an orgasm! Write on, hon!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 11, 2021
Life is either energy or matter and they are interchangeable. Once Homo sapiens understands this, there is no worry that life will continue to evolve, with or without us as we stand by the seashore of the universe.

Also an interesting reference to the footsteps of some human walking an ancient American shore 20,000 years or more will be for the Asian migration that started around 17,000 years ago.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 11, 2021
A special being indeed, a special poet. I love the images presented of water and waves, so appropriate, and so insightful. It could apply to other things as well, such as air. The oneness of the reality is a miracle to behold, and a miracle to give expression to.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 11, 2021
You give the reader something unique to chew on. The shoreline is another wonderful place for airing out the mental clutter and seeing something in a fresh light of possibility. The flood of negative ions help stimulate the imagination as well. A colorful read clearly seen in the minds eye. Thanks for sharing... rlc

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on July 11, 2021
I feel this so deeply- as it captures so well the experience of life.
Each year I get a long hike or two in Maine, and I get to the Maine coast. I am miles from any other person. Me- and sea gulls, Osprey, and various shore birds. Seals way out on some rocks that stick out.
Just be there- so it is not only where you are- but who you are.

John


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