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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Inalterable Life

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

We often hear “there’s so much to live for.” Sadly, few consider the “so much” principal they live for. Opting instead for superficial answers. (Image by Sarolta Ban)

Tuesday, July 11, 2023


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Inalterable Life


To die of empty purpose
To feel one’s last breath
As if extermination were bliss
The closing of vacuous life

How sentient the passing for some
Where remnants of consciousness
Forever etched in a canvas of choice
A poem
A letter
A painting
A symphony
Drifts not into oblivion
But remains attached as awareness

So gratifying for some
This departing option
To know living depended not on
Accumulated material’s decorative identity
But nurturing the heart and mind’s
Consummate potential

Could it be
Living a life of imaginative risk
Not only empowers deepest healing
But defends spirit against desolation?

Enigmatic
Some call it
Others frame such mindfulness
As deliverance from false reality
Accepting neither mortality’s curse
Or eternity’s promise

Intrinsic to Nature’s grand design
Creativity’s essence knows no limit
Keeping its ultimate purpose
An ever-challenging mystery
Of an inalterable life

 



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Reviewed on July 12, 2023
So often, having witnessed death two times, did it matter how they lived or does it matter "where" their "soul", their "essence" is going? "everlasting life" could be very true. Yes, some people will read a poem one left or a painting one did and remember someone who has no memory of them as they continue their new journey???!!!! You got me going again, Odin!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 11, 2023
I can imagine that everything one puts their hands and mind to (to do creatively) is an 'imaginative risk.' Your phrase: "As deliverance from false reality" My take: Poetic writing can help a soul deal with loss and rejection up to a point. Without a doubt, perception is reality to the one experiencing it. There are some things though, that we will never understand or make peace with, especially when it comes to other humans. That's why one should always be open to modifying their perceptions if the preponderance of evidence demands it. Keep playing to your strengths, Kent. It's what you're best at. Enjoyed your thoughts. r


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