Dry Is My Pallet (poem) by Lisa Hilbers on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

It is true that at times we can feel as though we mean very little in the grand scheme of things but in reality we are each a supportive spoke in the magical wheel life. All that is will never again be the same for our presence here, and where our feet have trod, the earth herself has experienced a change that will never return exactly as she was. Every molecule in the universe is in some way affected by our very existence. As far as our words upon the page, I believe that they do impact those who read them, if only for a moment, as mine here probably are doing to you right now. The ability to write emotion, understanding or our deepest, perhaps subconscious thoughts is a blessing. Let us cast our words upon the page, as food for thought for all who chance to read them. I believe that God does not evaluate our importance here by the same standards as humans do. We each have a purpose, and our mission is as individual and as important as all the others. This marvelous poem sighs like a shallow breath, hoping for the best yet fearing the worst; human nature in its raw and most natural form. This is a poem that should be cherished by all who read it as there is a small piece of each of is within its verse. Most excellent write, Lisa!

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Lisa, this is a universal fear. The fear of unimportance, of being forgotten. We reach; every time we write we reach for that little bit of recognition. We want to make our mark, leave our footprint on the world. Words are our tools -- so well I understand this poem. I have a short story posted here on AD: "Forget me Not" Written from a child's point of view. When her alcoholic uncle announces he will live for ever. We think of forever as on going here on this earth and we know ourselves to be. The point she makes at the end of the story is that he wants her to remember his name. Our words and thoughts are important. You've touched on so many levels I can certainly relate to, with "Dry is My Pallet" I could go on forever and a day. Excellent piece of work. ~~Carmen

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

This is tremendous poetry!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Sweet flow of words that leave the reader breathing sighs of contentment but...
you will never be forgotten, just as you have made a mark on us here at the authours den soon too will you make one on the public literary scene and so become immortal.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Wonderful piece Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Lisa, Lisa, Lisa,

Is writing worth it? Definately. Will it make us rich? Probably not...but the reader who reads your words and feels them resonate within their soul is indeed blessed. I know you've blessed me...a powerfully compelling, heart-touching write. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Words that echo the truth! excellent write and honest handling of the truth.

Thank you,

Tyrone

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Wonderful written!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

you have a gift for putting words together perfectly, to paint a picture of whatever you chose to depict.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

"And my words; These words will never embrace
matter- Not on your heart; Nor mine-
They'll disappear one page at a time-
and lay as forgotten as I"
Powerful Lisa we all feel like were dry of spiritual words and worth but never a word written nor spoken is ever lost that it doesnt reach the willing ear. Wonderful muse.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Profound, thought-provoking write, Lisa!

God bless,

Sandoe.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Your well will never run dry nor your pallet, for you paint sincerity in all of your writes that touches so many hearts here in the den.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

I agree with Don below in entirety Lisa !
This is a compelling and entrancing poem , rich in honesty and humility
Filled with hard edged raw emotion, this has to be one of your best ever compositions !
Definitely a keeper !
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Life being the conundrum that it is sometimes gives us a slanted, ugly perspection of ourselves. Actually, we are all, for the most part, pretty good folks even with our quirks and pettiness.

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

your words may mean much more than you can comprehend, you write poetry that the reader can feel. this is a compelling poem.