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A Better Time; A Better Place
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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A Better Time; A Better Place
 


 


 

Just a handful of sand; Funneling
through my loosely gripped fingers-
Alot like life. I felt each grain, slipping
carelessly away-
Plaqued with emotions; I bowed my head.
Turned from the breaking tide-
Hurried my mind to a better time;
A better place

 


 

In an open meadow of wildflowers; Pausing
to enjoy their beauty-
Swaying back and forth in a warm Spring
breeze; Basking in scents of honeysuckle
and wild lavender; Melting in the contrasts
of the freshly painted roses-
Sadness overcame me; As I knew the
Summer heat would return this glorious
field to a prickly patch of weeds-
I bowed my head; Closed my eyes to the
inevitability of change-
Hurried my mind to a better time;
A better place

 


 

In the shade of the large oak; I sat
with the ancient scholars; Drinking from their
fountains of knowledge; Applying myself in ways
I'd never done before; Allowing more than the basic
colors; The simplest verses; The generics of this
round flat world to feed my hunger-
Bound by confusion; Suddenly I could no longer
understand their archaic tongues-
I bowed my head; Slammed the
door of lost wisdom behind me-
Hurried my mind to a better time;
A better place

 


 

Looking into a sunrise; Standing high
above the world- Beholding this divine vision
of hope-
I bowed my head in prayer of recieving the Knowledge;
Strength; Courage and Faith I will need
to last me a lifetime-
For without them; There will be no better time;
Nor better place

 


 

© Lisa Hilbers
1/25/2006

 


 


 


 


 


 

   


 

 


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 Reviews of "A Better Time; A Better Place"
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2010
This is a very lovely writing, and it speaks greatly of life. I like your style, and your expression, very much. Thank you for this.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 29, 2006
I agree with Jude. I truly enjoy a poem that states things so that they can be understood and interpreted according to the author's intent. Thank you for sharing this gift, Lisa. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 27, 2006
i luv poems that require no effort to read and this one is no exception

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2006
You have a great talent with free verse....

Reviewed on January 27, 2006
As always your pen and mind create words to leave one in the deepest of thought.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Well done, my friend. The imagery is beautiful, the rhythm is devine and it touches both the heart and mind.

Bobbi

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Sometimes it seems so difficult to swallow the bitter taste of the moment and so we turn out thoughts to a better time in order to relieve ourself of that which sours our day. Truth being as it is, we learn that we must live in the today and understand that what is past, though perhaps a better time, is not our current reality. Faith and belief will pull us through this most difficult of times and we will once again rest in the beauty of the day. Profound message and an exquisite write, Lisa. As always it is a pleasure to read one of your wonderful poems.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Wonderful written!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
A powerful message, Lisa. There can never be no better time or place than here and now.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
A truly inspiring write, and I agree with George, without faith in God, life is like an empty void.
TY for this wonderful sharing Lisa
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
A beautiful and inspiring write Lisa.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Utterly beautiful Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
This is so beautiful it is complete. And inspiring Lisa.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Outstanding! Coming to the full knowledge of where we find that better time and place. Your wisdom shines in this gem of a poem Lisa!
Another keeper!Thanks!

Eileen

Reviewed on January 25, 2006
lisa,

beautiful imagery, lovely words! very nice! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Deep in the recesses of your heart this poem grew combinging with the brillance of your mind to produce this masterpiece. I am always amazed at your talents dear Lisa and feel awed in the presence of your work.

Felix

Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Lisa,

Absolutely. Yes. Absolutely!

Deeply emotional, with a powerful message of hope in the darkness. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
To have no belief in God or the hereafter is a futile life indeed.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Seems your poetry of late is running with the same theme, war told in a different slant and a higher plane. You working on a possible book?

Reviewed on January 25, 2006
Ah Lisa, how beautiful and deep this is, outstanding as always!

Reindeer


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