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I Cried Because I Care
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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I Cried Because I Care
© Lisa Hilbers


 


Brisk; Wind, Rain and Life-
The same as Mine; Yours and Theirs-
I cried when I felt your pain-
I cried because I care


Traveling through time as though it never ends,
catching tailwinds and bowing to nothing or nobody-
Invincible; The craving for excitement without pause-
Oh but I touch emptiness in this moment, but it's your face I see


Yes I say, it's your face; The face of mine; The face of beauty-
The face of pain; anguish and honestly knowing life as it is-
Calling out the name; and knowing it will answer back-
not wanting or expecting any kind of self justice


I cried when I felt your pain; I cried because I care-
Look at me! Look at me, and hear my woes-
Turn away only when you can't stand it anymore-
still I see your pain, Oh the hurt, Yes the hurt, still shows


Not knowing when; Or if our time has come;
We'll turn to face death just in time to sigh-
Look at me! Look at me and hear my woes-
It's only because I care, that I cry


Our world has been given it's own life sentences,
today; tomorrrow, maybe not- Who knows?
Take me to the garden where beauty astounds-
Take me to the garden where newness grows


Fading into the distance; Exploiting life as it falls-
I just follow the chalklines, neverending lanes and lines-
My horizons no longer exist, and eternity will not call-
sweetness is to bitter; as war is to wine


I would not cry, if I didn't care;
somehow nothing ever seems fair-
I touch emptiness; and your golden hair-
I've wiped all the tears; that we ever shared


Sweetness is to bitter; As war is to wine;
Romance is to hate; As black is to white-
Light is to shadow; As turn is to see-
Face is to notice; As death is to sight


Oh I would not cry; If I didn't care;
how badly you hurt; In this world we share-
Today is not over; Can we call it a truce?
and save just one life, of our dying youths?


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 Reviews of "I Cried Because I Care"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Wonderfully done.
Compassionate...

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 20, 2006
One of our best. Very moving. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on August 19, 2006
I love reading your poetry Lisa, always have, this is excellent.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on July 23, 2006
Lisa, I loved this one. It's a keeper. You almost sound like an empath.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Excellent message!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Thank you for sharing Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
intense write Lisa and so much aching pain you share with us when it comes to the honesty of death and dying in war. Well stated.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Splendid importunate poem of empathy and longing for that grace which would bring about the peace and harmony we all long for.

Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Lisa,

Exceptionally heart-touching, beautiful compassion shines in your words; God bless you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on July 20, 2006
A powerfull, emotional and touching write, brilliant penmanship!
B&R

Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Powerful write, Lisa; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <


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