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Primal Void
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Star-studded night
Shadowy new moon
Wintry alpine meadow
Whispering frozen grass
Earth’s slumbering depths
Ancient hauntings endure

Roiling volcanic seas
Continents torn asunder
Relentless torrential rains
Flourishing verdant vegetation
Slithering entities evolve
Primordial forces abide

Rhythmic galactic pulse
Penetrating solar flares
Spinning planetary procession
Entrancing meteoric incandescence
Mute lunar sentries
Cosmic mysteries elude

Light encircles dark
Creation tempers destruction
Matter ever conserved
Warped space-time dimensions
Detached beckoning void
Whither circumscribed consciousness?

--C.G. McGovern-Bowen, Westlake Village, 07/11/04


© 2004 Carolyn Gale McGovern-Bowen. All Rights Reserved.


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Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 18, 2009
I'm going face first into your roots when you get off that stagecoach...coming first from the original bond centuries ago...Rhythmic...Penetrating...going back to your roots...doing you primal...

Sage

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on July 25, 2004
Carolyn, you've won another admirer. This is a sterling piece filled with clarity and wonder. I am still breathless.
Chanti

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
Fantastic write.
Very well and outstandingly expressed.
The ending is the best.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
Vivid images. A most thought provoking poem, excellent last verse.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2004
Love the way you ended this one with such an insightful question.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 15, 2004
God gave us but one soul and one body and He will rise us up on the last day. Interseting thoughts and images in a deftly powerful poem.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2004
Very powerful and wonderful images Carolyn!!!… My take on transmigration of souls is if your asking me if I believe in reincarnation, Yes!!!

The Bible Clearly States: In Matthew, 11:13- 14; 16:13. Jesus asking his disciples whom do men say that I, the son of man, am, (Matt. 16:13) and the disciples answered some say that thou art John the Baptist, some Elias and others Jeremiahs or one of the prophets. How could Jesus be thought to be any of these except in a past life? Elias and Jeremiahs lived centuries before. As for John the Baptist, since he had recently been put to death, there could not have been a reincarnation, but it seems that some people thought that his spirit could have inspired Jesus. If people could speak in this way they obviously took the doctrine for granted. That Jesus is actually asking the question shows he is aware of the doctrine of reincarnation and considers it valid.

Jesus himself tells his disciples who John the Baptist really was in the past: For all prophets and the law prophesied until John. And if ye will receive it, this is Elias, which was for to come. He that hath ears to hear let him hear. (Matt. 11:13-14)

So Elias, according to Jesus himself, came back to earth in the personality of John the Baptist. This is repeated or confirmed in Matt. 17:12: But I say unto you that Elias is come already and they knew him not, but have done unto him whatsoever they listed. Likewise shall also the son of man suffer of them. 13. The disciples understood that he spake unto them of John the Baptist.

The third reference comes as a question concerning a blind man. The disciples ask Jesus: Who did sin, this man, or his parents, that he was born blind?" (John 9:2-3) How could a man sin before he was born, unless the sin was committed in another life? The apostles are not asking what kind of sin resulted in blindness, but *who* sinned, taking for granted that the act of sinning itself brought about this dire result.

Furthermore, the sin could have been committed either by the man in a previous existence, or by his parents. This implies both that the sins of the parents are visited upon the children, which is a biblical doctrine, and that the soul exists and therefore pays for the transgressions of previous lives.

Jesus does not rebuff the apostles for asking such a question. If the doctrine had been alien to his mind, he would have told them that they were talking nonsense. He simply takes a different attitude. His answer: Neither hath this man sinned nor his parents, but that the works of God should be made manifest in him, (John 9:3) implies that the doctrine of karma (and therefore its corollary, reincarnation) is not always understood rightly and that the calamities that befall humans should not necessarily be laid at its door.

Reviewed by Michael Curry
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Heavy and full of raw power. I can feel the weight of the cosmos in this one. Nicely done!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
A powerful and beautiful write. Exploding with vivid images.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
This is so well written and it's
a beautiful cosmic verse.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
<Whither circumscribed consciousness?>
Well said! Thanks for sharing this!
Safi

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
this one just plain looks impressive before you read a word, Carolyn. and then I see the depths you've described. great work!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 11, 2004
excellent images you've used to describe the path of enlightenment ...

Whither circumscribed consciousness < < < what an intriguing line!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 11, 2004
Astrological crackerjack of a poem Carolyn !!!
Excellent and professional write

Peter Paton


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