A lovely haiku-chain structure that uses beautiful dynamic imagery (wind, wings, blowing, arrows) so that the dreamcatcher can easily be imagined catching and filtering. Very nice!
Axilea
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2012
Carolyn, Beautifully worded with adventurous praise.
Your haiku/senryu are always thought-inciting and they indicate (to me) that a lot of thought is put into their creation. Thank you, Carolyn. Love and best wishes,
It is strange how we seem to remember nightmares more vividly than ordinary dreams. And so many dreams evaporate when the sun comes through the window, filtered by a dream catcher.
Carolyn, terse and rich verse that suggests selective and subjective evaluations leave the truth behind at times and find evil when none was intended -- just my interpretation of course -- this is verse that holds my attention from first word to the last -- your hallmark my dear friend -- I wish you love and peace -- Jon Michael
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Axilea
Always,
Deborah
Embracing your poem in delight of a dreamcatcher.
Beautifully written C.
Lady Mary Ann
Regis
Best wishes, Diana..
Ron
Anna
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and as always a genuine pleasure
to read and savour
john
I loved the visual display you rendered in so well a penned piece.
Budd