Remove the coconut..."shoot me some beaver"...put the lime in the coconut and drink it all down...salty rim for the perfect marguerita in all of its delicious anality...aroused...keeping fluttering time rapid tongue beats dispersing nectar...get you there...float your woman in a boat and tell me you did...
All the gentle delicacy of a transparent, rainbowed floating bubble drifting wherever it will, that "on-air" feeling we could live with forever, like Cloud 9! Just the thing for this dismal UK evening! Summer now seems a long way away... but thankfully not here! Uplifting, thank you!! Kate xx
buoyed by your uplifting, beautiful haiku--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
I loved this one Caroyln my grandpaerents has a well in the back yard with holly hocks and other assored flowers all around it and the Humming Birds alwas came to drink from the center of orange trumpet flowers. You brought that memory back with this beautiful poem Ty....
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
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Sage
Beautiful imagery enjoyed tremendously.
warm hugs
Elga
Love Tinka
Peter
sueb
buoyed by your uplifting, beautiful haiku--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
LP