Reverberations (Haiku) (poem) by C. G. McGovern-Bowen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 11, 2009

Floating feather falls from my dreamcatcher above my futon bed, spiraling spiraling erotically...your pond's not so still...

Sage

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 7, 2005

This shows the value of every living thing and its/our affect on time and matter. Such enormous meaning! This is very fine haiku, Carolyn. Beauty...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

As always Carolyn a beautiful haiku...it is nice to have someone else see the world as I do...

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

I love how your words in short form really get to the essence of a moment and a mood. Breathtakingly beautiful.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

I can stand for hours, looking at a mill pond or still sea.
With all natures reflections, of wild life..
Being enchanted, by the tree's gently swaying, and so on.
We sure do have a slice of heaven on earth, if we see it like you do..

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Softly beautiful reverberations.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Beautiful.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Love the imagery here, Carolyn.

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

This is a very beautiful scene that you've painted with your words. Thanks for the images.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Aha been there .... "Floating Muse"

"Floating muse"

I am on an autumn leaf
On a silvery water stream
Twirling-dancing-floating
On the rhythm�
Of beautiful tranquil music
Swaying-bumping-turning
Down around and around
To the left to the right
Down-down-down on the beat
Of your watery heart beat
Head spinning with ever joy
Faster and faster
Cool water embraces my curly wings
Splashing love drop into my face
I laugh out loud
I am happy
I am with you
My ever joy� my deepest love� �Nature�
Singing-swaying-floating
On silvery waters of love
I hear the thunder rumble
I go faster and faster
I tumble�
Tumbling down-down down
On my wings of ever joy
Splashing down in ecstasy
No turn around �
Floating along�
With ever joy deep within my heart
My floating muse
With You!!
�Nature�

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

captures the moment most vividly!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Beautiful and serene
Bravo!

William ......Peace & Love