Ah how nice. I like and respect the art of Haiku but never quite mastered it. I like the cleanliness and simplicity of it. You've done a good job with this one.
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
http://deoxy.org/geoman.htm
Sage
Love the form.
Williamm ....peace & Love
Regis
peace and love, Carole
Love,
Eileen
Dead on the money! Excellent 'ku! This format really suits you.
Peace,
B
Love Tinka
Safi
Carmen :-)