Precession (Haiku) (poem) by C. G. McGovern-Bowen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on December 31, 2005

Yup.

Have a wonderful New Year, Carolyn.

Reviewed on December 30, 2005

The sea shells and bones remake the souls of our time. Bones and shells never quit furnishing intelligence and energy. But...one has to pick up the shells and bones, put the arrow to the bow and scribe it all down on vellum. It is the only way to preserve creative wisdom and pass it on to future generations. Without it, prepare for worldy obliteration. 2006 will mark a new course of events! Happy New Year, Carolyn.

Sage

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 30, 2005

Absolutely brilliant!!

Love it!!

Happy New Year my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 30, 2005

Splendid haiku Carolyn, as always

Carole...love and peace

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on December 30, 2005

I reckon Walter Cruttenden is correct Carolyn, history would seem to hold that true, that here is indeed an invisibile link between the equinoxes and epochs...a divine preset pattern!
And the haiku is startingly graphic
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 30, 2005

Your creativity doesn't seem lost in the mist, Carolyn.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on December 29, 2005

yeah..especially if there really is an akashic records and everything that's ever occured are stored there, that should go beyond ages, right? a very visual poem, this. when writing on such topics, i think graphic descriptions work well to 'humanize' the topic, and you've created an excellent visual to go with the overall theme. walter's not the only one who thinks that, either...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 29, 2005

Thanks for the things to ponder! Superb Haiku Carolyn!

Healthy Happy New Year to you and yours!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on December 29, 2005

Thanx for the note, above. I think the Haiku is excellent but I wouldn't have made that connection.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on December 29, 2005

excellent atmosphere and mood and most interesting note - I've often pondered the idea of cyclical dark ages and bursts of "enlightened" years. interesting to consider that there might be some link or pattern, but, yes, frightening to consider the full ramification of such. Dawn

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 29, 2005

Is it not great reseding near the seashore?
loved this one Carolyn

William
Peace & Love