Great haiku that tells a story just as a haiku is supposed to do.
George
Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
This sounds like the beginning of some epic fairy tale. A haiku of cosmic proportion! Really nice! (And you know you've made a splash on AD when Wakefied trashes your work.)
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Love Tinka
Blessings,
Sharon
Peace
Love
William
George
Spiritual Truths...
Secrets in quartz pendulum...
Sage♥