Thank you for sharing this meaningful metaphorical offering, Carolyn. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Awesome!!! Beautiful phrasing!!

Anna

Having danced that dance and survivrd that wind, your poem brought back all those feelings again. Thank you.

Great title.
A new word for me.
Your gift shines here.
Blessings ... r

As always your writing is excellent!

Carole~

Something exciting about a wind blowing through your body, it is a cleansing of sorts and revitalizes you. I go to the beach in the winter for a wind bath, it's exhilarating!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Powerful imagery - and I learned something new - Harmattan.

Excellent write.

POWERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Carolyn,
This speaks to one who lived in deserts for ten years, Saudi and Kuwait - the early year duststorm - we called it the shamal - sent fine powder everywhere, past the window jambs, under the doors, into the eyes, ears, nose and worst of all between the teeth, i can still feel that grit...i should've worn wise native headdress..sorry, i'm rambling but you set me off.
luv 'Vortices of Past Lives spin'...whirling dervishes...and the final line is so right, the dunes had new shape and new character after each event.

John

I had to look up supernal...cool word! I enjoyed this poem.

Wow, this is top notch stuff. Excellent wriing.


Namasre