What a gem of a write!

I was swept away.

With respect and smiles,

Carol Phelan Aebby

In three distinct but overlapping stages you sweep the reader from the natural into the ethereal, from that primeval archetypal symbol - the sea - into the supernatural realm where horizon pushes up vertically into the upper atmosphere. Imagery and form conspire to sublimate an essence of utter peace until it saturates and oozes into osmosis. I fell in love with this poem and re-read it twice before sharing it with my wife.

Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem!
Roger

Sounds and images collide to give a real sense of this misty fusion, Carolyn, cleansing, embracing and tinglingly detoxing. You conjure also a sense of alchemy here - and love that word "trolling" which introduces a sense of otherworldliness. xx

Awesome!!!! There's nothing more soul-soothing that the ocean...and you have captured that in your beautifully crafted poetry...

Anna

I felt like I was walking on air
enjoying your vistas immensely

Lady Vivian

Yes, a visit to the seashore into that to you. Primordial instincts set in.

Ron

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Good to be reading you again
Always a great pleasure reading your profound Kus
Love & Peace be with you

William