I understand the complications of English but most poets will be able to see past that and understand what you have written quite well. This is excellent work. Continue to write what you feel and expand through your thoughts. Do the best you can as Sandie mentioned. Peace be with you.
Amor
Reviewed by Sandie Angel, a.k.a. May Lu
Reviewed on August 13, 2002
P.S.
Sorry! Your 3rd stanza has given me the thought-provoking ramblings of my previous posts.
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Amor
Sorry! Your 3rd stanza has given me the thought-provoking ramblings of my previous posts.
Hope I didn't confuse you.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
I hate poems with structure and form but no feelings whatsover - like eating a perfectly cut sandwich WITHOUT the miracle whip.
I'll eat a deformed mouth watering sandwich anytime.
.....and reading poetry is of no exception. Many successful poets write from their own hearts and souls, that's what makes great poetry.
My own quote of the day:
my own quote of the day:
People who live by the rules
have nothing to offer to themselves
except for being dragged by the nose
in obedience of the others
SandieAngel :o)