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Vapor
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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The ending of this poem may be confusing: the failing of the doctor refers to a health condition which a piece of fruit cannot handle.

                           Vapor

"We will all have our Eden,"

says the gardening book.  Perhaps --

if we have good genes, plump wallets,

pristine  air, endure, fortuitously,     

few face-slaps from Fate.

But anything is possible, they say                    

if we know how to root amidst  

the rubble of our living hells,

our troubled dying heavens.

I'm working on that, puttering with                            

eyes, heart, past.  But the fact is,

I've already had my eden,

a story unspectacular:  expelled

for heeding a mendacious viper                               

going on about how to hex the doctor                          

 

and, that failing, seeking the next best vapor.                                                                                                                                                                                                                    



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 Reviews of "Vapor"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
You express a great deal in these verses, Julie. Your poem is worthy of much more than a single reading. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed on September 30, 2008
Julie,

Excellent write with clever metaphors.

Mary


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