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Keepsake
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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Perhaps it should be embe dded in the poem, for better understanding, but I'll just say it here for now -- I was born in Louisville, Ky. Thus the grass...


Keepsake

I have already decided, when the time comes,
what to tell my siblings.
I want the little round clock on the fragile chain
royal blue, gold-rimmed, never worn.
Magical it seemed then, clock as necklace as clock.
It was such a thrill to peruse that jewelry box
Pandora's innerable twin.
My kin will be surprised
when I pass over the ivory-inlaid table,
the beautifully-wrought garments,
filigreed iron headboard.
Storms hailed us, beyond my childhood
as always, with mothers and daughters;
even today they rain.
You'd think I'd lay claim to things
large or fancy, for all that pain,
but no, just the curious clock
quiescently ticking
a half-century ago,
before the bluegrass turned to snow. 

Copyright Julianza Shavin 2008

 

 


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 Reviews of "Keepsake"
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Such beauty in these lines, Julianza. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Another neat one, Julie. Actually, the Louisville note should not be necessary since "bluegrass" speaks for a very special kind of country music, racing horses, and Kentucky in general. Nicely done :-)

Ted

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
Beautifully done, Julie. When my dad died the only thing I wanted
was his dollar pocket watch with the chain replacded by a black
shoestring/ That was a lot of years ago and I still haven't rewound that watch. Forgive the ramble. Also, when I lived in Cincinnati for awhile I would occasionally go down river to Louisville. How come
we never bumped into each other? -gene.

Reviewed on October 11, 2008
Julie,

Such a wonderful write. I think we all have one thing we particularly treasure. And I love the way describe the countryside. I've never been to Kentucky, but it sounds lovely.

Mary


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