Write or Wrong (poem) by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin on AuthorsDen

Write or Wrong
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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Time and Again, Acrylic, by Julianza Shavin Ever sat around online waiting forever for a reply? Or I guess it needn't be online. Hm: info on copying single spaced and ending up double, mystifyingly, would be helpful. Thanks.

WRITE OR WRONG Write me bastard, anything! Use all bad grammar Everything in your arsenal Fire off those guns! Screw up the quotes Run sentences on and on, Ramrod all caps and fatally maim Those greedy gerunds parched For fatuous apostrophes; Split infinities of infinitives And disarray all homonyms I don't care any more You can't tell a colon From your own white ass Just detonate and don't look back Consult nothing, demolish all, Let the elements of style rot With all your other rubbish. Pack the page with stunning trash And not a blunder burn or slash Write like there's no tomorrow, as tomorrow there's no today Matricide the troubled tongue So barren in its binge The silence so roars tonight, I can taste its hot breath singe. Copyright Julianza Shavin

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2008

What can I say, Julie, except you ROCK!!!

I started chuckling about halfway through and was in full laughter by the end. You were singing my song in your words. Write on!

Ted

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Gesundheit! I normally remain quite calm and collected when confronted with this situation. For at least three or four milliseconds. After which time I simply apply the manly simian approach and let loose with a barrage of expletives. If that does not rectify the malady, I move onto more fertile non-confrontational fields of endeavor. I can sympathize with your emoting. JMW

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Innovative style, but I must admit I don't wait, just move on. If someone chooses to catch up fine...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Julie, there have been nights when I felt like this,
though your flight of anger is more articulate than mine.
Mine usually begins #*+&#?*! and winds up assooooovernose!!!
Feel better now? -gene.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Julie,

Powerfully penned - deeply felt anger, write or wrong, it's penned - a carthetic release, perhaps? Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jael Fields (Reader)

Wonderful, Julie. I love the changes. It is more powerful now than when you first wrote it!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Wow. Powerful expression, Julianza. Funny thing is. I was hoping to hear from you. Clearly, you are a maiden/mistress of words. I mean that as a compliment. Your friend with love and peace and best wishes,

Regis