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Pen & Ink "Not Going Gentle" by Julianza Shavin I did not become a concert pianist. Grave is, of course, pron. grah-vay. Guilty as charged. As always.

The Rhythm of No My father's bones roil in their dirt berm molto grave. I sense it. After all those years of preening me they mewl after music, but my keys are tiny narrow fields fallow and faithless over skipped Springs. He whose ears were all adoration martyrs me meatless with this straining his own remains a meal for things with strange untoward rhythms ones we endeavored earnestly, symphonically, not to hear. Copyright Julianza Shavin 2008

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Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 27, 2008

does the "strange untoward rhythms" not suggest the probability of alien breach -- or is there mystery afoot here that eludes me? -- is this meant to imply a form of self generated internal discordance? --great peace to you this day and on the morrow too -- JMW

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2008

Really love that pen-n-ink, and your use of surprise-words, plunking those image-strings in the reader. Neat work :-)

Ted

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Julie,
superior word choice, excellent phrasing and a motif that sustains the reader; fine writing.
John

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

A masterpiece - BRAVA, Julienza, this tour de force -!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Your "Ovoid" inspired one of me own. :)

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Beautiful write with deep emotion.

Mary

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

What flare you have; your style is unique and reaching.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

At least, Julie, you write like a "concert" writer.
I love the use of mewl. -gene.

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