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Bright Burning
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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Ok, title from Tiger, Tiger,- Blake, of course. See if the off rhyme at the end works. I'm not certain.

Bright Burning

 

The lunatic tiger circles its cell

while the lady white as sun-kissed shells

adjusts her knee. Both wait, for you, for me.

What stalks behind curtains

petrifies me: rustling rats

that rancor my naps.


Love is a fickle prison

gnawing frantic its bars

and the lipsticked lady's

so lovely a game

I think of the tiger

and am instantly tamed.

 

Who am I am but a stubbled guard,

sucking hard on a stale cigarette,

fouling an uncaring animal's lair

  and perfect perfumed neck and hair?

Of course there's no question

the jaws will chomp down:

flailing arms fetch only false crowns.


You did actually say,

if not the dame,

her anatomical cousin.

And here I'd forgotten

you'd already

chosen.

 

Copyright Julie K. Shavin 2008



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 Reviews of "Bright Burning"
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
Julie,
No need for doubt of any kind, everything works here, the rich imagery, the flow of the language...and the ending is marvellous.
John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
I like the rhymes and near-rhymes throughout, Julie. I envy
writers who rhyme good. Love the alliteration. Love the poem.
-gene.

Reviewed on March 11, 2009
I love the way you write. Such imagery, such power, such beauty in these lines - works for me, too, Julianza. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
Very nicely done, can't speak for others but it sure works for me when I read it.
hugs
fee


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