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Unraveling the Wool
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I may need to add in a part I took out. Opinions? It was that the coat didn't weigh me down; it was thinner than the others. Value your feedback, my readers. Pardon the split infinitive.

            Unraveling the Wool

My mother had trouble dressing me right.
I was limp-haired, long-faced, and thick-hipped.
Shopping was a misery, dragging from store
to store to find anything that might help.

One day, after an exhausting traipse
through a dozen department stores,
she floated a coat off the rack as though
it were a magician's cape.

Wool, and shin-length, it was a lovely shade
of pink, it had padded shoulders,
and sported a little tie under the collar.
The pink made my eyes more blue than gray,

feminized me in a way that enormously
pleased my mother.
How happy that she was content with me,
if only during winter.

I wore that coat for countless seasons,
never letting on that, actually,
it never did keep me warm.
For that, I had to finally leave home.


 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Unraveling the Wool"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 10, 2009
You, have one incredible mind...from your pain, you write...and oh, how it makes this reader feel!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 10, 2009
Symbolically expressive in meaning and depth of emotion expressed; at least, that's my "take" on this poem. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on May 10, 2009
It works well. Very nicely done!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
I understand this one only too well, it is amazing what we will do to make our parents happy. Times were rough and I grew up in a large family one year I had no winter coat and wanted one like the other kids had..the current style was the duffle coats with the horn buttons. Well to make a long story short my mother tried making me one by cutting down an old rcmp coat that was so stiff and ugly I would take it off even in the coldest weather but not until out of sight of our house so I wouldn't hurt her feelings.

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
The things we do for parents and children and others. this honest open poem with a flash of vulnerability is excellent. Liz


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