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Crabbles no het Nomo (Scrabble...)
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin → (All Poetry by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin)
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A "sudden poem" for my poet-friend, who turns 21 today.

By the way, I made a few changes to Walking on Sun. For one thing, I noticed an "eating" theme, so the title is now Eating the Sun. And changed a bit more. The second item needed a little developing.

            Scrabble on the Moon

You, young waif, must have had a love, a lover
which you adamantly deny.
But how else could you write like you do?
You had a lover, are mad, a liar, a genius.
Confess.
I know it. I know it:
You played Scrabble on the moon.
Your lover was perfect: dark, thin,
with long satin lashes and black suicide eyes.
He completed you, no, surpassed you,
surprised you with your own device:
shoved a wooden crate through your chest
so you could feel something.

Only pain this profound
could bring on your swoon.
The problem was (am I correct?)
that you are eminently literate,
but your lover could not spell --
or it seemed so, in the absence of gravity.
The letters kept flying into space,
so how, really, to know?

Oh, the words were spectacular:
yours, and your word-twin's,
you aching, laureate logophiles,
looking down on Earth
with equivalent disdain,
as it always bored you with
its tiresome blue and green.

Beautiful words: ululate, viscera, juniper,
quaver, sartorial, isothermal, plantain,
all stunners, fifty points, a hundred, more.
The competition was killing, which
which engendered more love.
Your lips locked with words.
You couldn't let go.
Anyway, it was hard to see
in the weak light of sleepy suns.

But the words, the letters, floated,
conjugating space, germinating
permutations: six, seven,
ten syllables, more --
words giant as Jupiter
with his diligent vigilant eye,
as inflamed, as passionate as Venus,
as lovely as Saturn swirling
in her diaphanous petticoat prism.

The words spelled the sky.
In time, they spelled, literally, sky,
a mere ten points draped in dark.
But oh, my darling young one,
that's just what love does.
It's how love goes.
And your inner genius knows.

Copyright Julie K. Shavin 2009
 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Crabbles no het Nomo (Scrabble...)"
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
You have a real original style that almost makes even a casual viewer read your work.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
Such a magnificent tribute to your young friend who is just beginning to embark into the many realms of living....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
Darling, lilting little thing spilling across my star-strewn eyes. Me? I love Scrabble. But be sure to let the lovers know that the little words like You and We and Us and Yes are the ones that cross and criss-cross and get the 50 point scores... and At and Oh, and...

This one scores high in my book. --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 17, 2009
I love the alien love theme here and the side of love seldom written about...the uncertainty of whether a love is recipricol or just one sided. Very nicely done and I am sure your friend's birthday will be just a little more special when they read this.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
This is a helluva tribute, dear Julie, to your young friend and,
I hasten to add, to your mastery of the language, an eight-letter
word for azneiluj. af-g.

Reviewed on June 16, 2009
This is magnificent, Julie! I love scrabble, so I was flowing right along with you in this multi-layered ode to love.


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