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I feel...Dead
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This was brought on by the need for a new style, this is not a style yet tried by me, I hope it fits together and flows okay, it wa a risk stepping out of my comfort zone.


I feel trapped,I cant adapt to being
Stabbed in the back slipping through the cracks.

I feel betrayed, so afraid of being
Accused, hidden, when only you know I didn't.

I feel disguised, I despise being
Covered by a shield, My true self never revealed.

I feel deceit, I'm so incomplete being
Torn apart by you,got a broken heart from you.

I feel cheated, I've been defeated being
Kicked when I'm weak, I can't even speak.

I feel pain,not this again,you're being
Unfair, unaware? No,you know you cause despair.

I feel used, I was confused being
Led in the wrong direction,with no protection.

I feel gone, nobody to lean on being
Told the words I dread,you killed me I'm dead.

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 Reviews of "I feel...Dead"
Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Imagination rings the bell of knowledge; art respond to intuition, emotions reaches the

heart... The Poet interprets the sounds, poemizes the feelings and dares to poetize a new

form, and "I feel...Dead” is live! I read it, I feel it, I learn from it, and I say, EUREKA!

A true Poet is commanding the CLASS!

I greet You, Poet Kaci Riann, You are a true picture of real Poet!

Blest be Your heart.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Stepping out of your comfort zone is good for you. Try it more often. A comfort zone only locks you out of all your possibilities.Good expression.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
This is a fantastic poem!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
always explore new structural modes and poetic veins of thought and you will be successful as you are in this poem... well done!

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Excellent, Kaci. It's great to try new styles. A lot of poets get stuck in one style and one theme.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
This was a wonderful poem and it awesoem that you expanding you type of genres I try to also

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Its great that you are expanding in your attempts. Great write and I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
wonderful poem, good for you to try all genre's, this makes a well rounded poet.

Reviewed by Sarah Mathews (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Excellent poem kaci! It flowed perfectly!

~*SARAH*~


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