your eyes cry out, my friend! what breach of life's law? how much you suffer for what lies hard within...? you hold what, what!? -- body's claim to nature's taunts? and ... you without relief enough for this... pain?
help, she cried...long ago believing all was sin-- within... ever-after life's-light shone dimmed...
someday a miracle perhaps? if not for... her, then him?-- or him or her or one heart's hope?
hearts sing truthful psalms of hope-- and love must again convince the breached, one is simply... human.
may it be...
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Reviews of "nature's mirrors, askew"
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2003
the consummate internal struggle for some sort of self acceptance...and later release...beautifully expressed...dire...my kind of urgency...love&light..**Mari**
May it be, as Enya sang the song...
Blue eyed fish...
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2003
"may it be"... INDEED! absolutely breathtaking, this... you think deeply, speak openly and write beautifully! I'm moved. katy.
Reviewed by sugar magnolia (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2002
The title caught me. Excellent language- I especially liked "body's/claim to nature's taunts?" great concept.
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