this chasm (poem) by Micha Julian on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

I liked this, you have described it so well,

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 7, 2003

I love where you took my mind!
LOL
may I have it back now?
just kidding!
pax....anita

Reviewed by Bogdan Tiganov (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2003

don't get sucked in the vortex it's hard to get out again you have to fight like in the playgrounds - well done

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on January 28, 2003

this write is not in vain...

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2003

lovely. I think the world too knows this. I think the world hides its knowledge of this. Well written and a noble cause

Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2003

"prison walls
are there for a reason--
to be climbed over.

AND OVER AND OVER "

Mi... you speak...I hear...I see... incredible piece my friend I am so glad I found this today!! Bravo ((YOU))

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2003

Deep Micah, like the chasm it describes. Excellent, profound work.

Reviewed by Debs

Reviewed on January 23, 2003

Excellent work! It spoke to me at so many different levels
Debs

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Speechless..WooooooooooW.. This is incredible..Micha you have been holding back.... Bravo!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

i luv your unique style and voice... within every chasm there is light not far ahead, if we look far enough within...

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

we just have to try and climb out of the chasm, before it fills up with more debris,
burying us...until then, there is always hope - thanks for offering a hand up ! (-:

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

your muse is deep...the inner chambers of your heart...your work reveals your spirit...excellent!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

This is why I admire your voice as much as I do:

prison walls
are there for a reason--
to be climbed over.

and over and over

You write from within, you sing the text as you type. I'm bowing.

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

excellent write(:

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

:) Yes, Mi, it may have not been in vain. Never for you, who climbs and falls and climbs, evermore. You will reach the top, Micha, your soul is so close, you question the all. So close, Mi...