anger ... the scars (poem) by Micha Julian on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2003

i like this, and i like the form. nice job.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

(((i feel your pain)))

heartbreaking, heartfelt write...keep writing...it does help

(((((HUGS))))) and love,

karla. :(

this write is OUTSTANDING--excellent verse and imagery

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

well done.
Your technique in this is impeccable and your write is good.

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

you put soul into words...yes, anger is part of soul as well as pain...there is no healing,only coming to grips with them...very good vent!!!

Reviewed by Four Provinces (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

Anger is the first and healthiest step towards healing, mi. (((you)))
Great writing and you really pour it all in there in a few words. I would take a novel to express all this powerful emotion.
Brilliant!
Love,
C

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 11, 2003

Oh yes..feel the pain it this one so well, just wonderful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2003

a papercut
piercing the soul!-

What a perfect, most graphic way to explain it, Ouch. This one hurts Micha. Exceptional work.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Amen, to all the comments.
I can't improve on any.
Well done, too.

~E

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Excellent, Micha. Scars in anger scorch the heart and soul yet we sometimes do not learn when we are so forgiving. However, the creator knows and remembers for it is that kind of heart that is rewarded first.
Amor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

How to heal? The question of centuries has no valid answer for the soul holds the answer to the one with the question.
I am so proud of tour progress and yor poetry. Very pride woman of Light.

Love AND PEACE..`LIGHT!
susan

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

You are a Cinquain master. LOVED IT!!!!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

temper
it, anyway,
begs the self-- trying to
remember, again, after -- how
to heal...

hope and forgiveness, healing, always it's up to us to heal ourselves...Nice Job

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Yes, yes! How to heal indeed.....A very needful write. Loved this...Thank you....Dani