Very very good challenge write, Michael. Enjoyed this very much!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
Michael...a lot of visuals and feelings intertwined with these wonderful wintry lines....I love it...you also are my favorite...thanks for the nice note.....floria
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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Wonderful imagery in this write. So beautifully done!
Tami
~Kari Anne~
"The mountains send a northern kiss "
very poetic
peace
You did do the challenge and it is so good You Rock now this is egg nog.
Love the imagery in your verses and that ending is so awesome...
Thank you for joing ht e Challenge. sheer delight.
"Airy voices call through the rush.
barely hearing the warnings hush...
Blame rime and hoar. Cheeks lose their blush.
The sentinels embrace cold sleep... not death.
As flakes of white dance through our breath.
Obeying sighs the Ice Queen sayeth.
Sheer skirts of mist... and round they twirl.
Transparent locks do twine and curl.
Whispering sails.. time to unfurl.
Catch me if you can..."
Top Class Award
Taylor
This is awesome. I love your inspiration on this challenge...
Lovely pic of you and your wife...
Awesome images...
"The leaves lie down as authors let go.
Earth quilt prepared... receiving snow.
pewter clouds proclaim Winter's blow.
The mountains send a northern kiss
Through leaf and branch, a sigh... a hiss.
Seasons change... Something amiss.
Fingers dance down neck and spine.
Invisible lips that are not mine...
kissing thee and kissing thine.
Gifts of frost and tales of ice.
Adding snow for winter's spice.
Blow again. Not once... not twice. "
Peggy