Dee, this poem is so beautiful. something that I'd come back to- time and time again to read
Reviewed by CARLA
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
DE... YOU ARE VERY TALENTED. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WITH ME. I LIKE IT, ALOT. YOU SHOULD HAVE YOU WORK PUBLISHED. THANKS FOR THE E-MAIL. YOUR FRIEND,CARLA
What can I say to this...can I just give you a huge YES!!
"Dreamy words that melt my heart when spoken true
Filling abysmal voids that time has laid waste too
Words made up of wispy tendrils that twine through your soul
Entering that forbidden kingdom that makes me feel more whole"
You are so on, it is the forbidden Kingdom that anothers words can unlock, and you have expressed that in beautiful poetic form! Right to the heart with this one!
I love...
"Filling abysmal voids that time has laid waste too" That is a helluva line, that will stay with me for a while!
Words light as angels’ wings lifting me from the darkness in which I bathe.....
Thank you for this beautiful write Dee C...
With The Whisper of your Thoughts...in my Mind...
Love
Tinka
Nice descriptive work here. I like the way the poem moves, and I don't know if this is stylisticly specific to all your poems or not, but I like the two line stanza's here because they seem like a sort of poetic whisper in themselves. Bravo.
When Sophie Bayles inadvertently ruins a young man’s chance for employment, she sets out to find him a new position. Even though he doesn’t want her to.
What can I say to this...can I just give you a huge YES!!
"Dreamy words that melt my heart when spoken true
Filling abysmal voids that time has laid waste too
Words made up of wispy tendrils that twine through your soul
Entering that forbidden kingdom that makes me feel more whole"
You are so on, it is the forbidden Kingdom that anothers words can unlock, and you have expressed that in beautiful poetic form! Right to the heart with this one!
I love...
"Filling abysmal voids that time has laid waste too" That is a helluva line, that will stay with me for a while!
Hugs,
Maria
xoxoxo
Sincerely,
Lucy Edwards
A whisper can send you free.
William
Thank you for this beautiful write Dee C...
With The Whisper of your Thoughts...in my Mind...
Love
Tinka
Promises heard that fall upon my ears so sweet."
Yes, Dee, poetic whispers always confront we.
Your voices are lovely and loved, that is what moves me, the link between we and me...
Erin
:)
Jenni
Jack