I have only three 9-11 poems in me. One is already on this site ("To an All-American family") and another deals with that day in light of some of the local police officers and firefighters I've had contact with during my career. This is the third.
Please don't be offended by this work, but like most of us, the only exposure we have to New York's public safety agencies come from the safety of our TV rooms.Using the taglines from some past television crime dramas, I put together this unlikely tribute to New York's Finest and Bravest as regards 9-11.
"on a day when three
thousand stories
came to a violent end," i love the way you wrote this that is so true. Such a unique way to say that.
Steve, This is a very nice powerful tribute to all those on that tragic day. I don't know why you say it wouldn't be received well. This is so nice so real, honest and truthful, really gets the tears to flowing.,
"Some gave all after
kissing little Harvey
goodbye for the last time"
So true. Every line in this poem is sad and honorable. Very Very nice poem and tribute.
Tracey xoox(c :)42
Yes Steve..they did do good. You managed to bring a tear to my eye, It's a day that I've personally vowed to never let be forgotten. The lives it ended and the lives it changed deserves to forever be remembered.
Thank you for this very sobering and touching write. Lisa
yep--they done good. they gave their lives trying to save others...how many were saved because of their efforts? thousands more got out because of them--our brave firefighters, police officers and e.m.s. workers--kudos to them, and to you, for remembering their ultimate sacrifice. a stunning, strong write of memorial. BRAVO!
if anyone is offended, shame on them--we should never forget.
(((((HUGS))))) and i appreciate this more than you'll know
love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
Powerful poem reminding of the sad devastation, that shocked not only America but also every corner of this world..
thousand stories
came to a violent end," i love the way you wrote this that is so true. Such a unique way to say that.
Steve, This is a very nice powerful tribute to all those on that tragic day. I don't know why you say it wouldn't be received well. This is so nice so real, honest and truthful, really gets the tears to flowing.,
"Some gave all after
kissing little Harvey
goodbye for the last time"
So true. Every line in this poem is sad and honorable. Very Very nice poem and tribute.
Tracey xoox(c :)42
A salto or a backflip of reality when so many hearts tumbled down!!!!
Love Tinka
Thanks for sharing.......
This is powerful and
so well written...
Peggy
Thank you for this very sobering and touching write. Lisa
yep--they done good. they gave their lives trying to save others...how many were saved because of their efforts? thousands more got out because of them--our brave firefighters, police officers and e.m.s. workers--kudos to them, and to you, for remembering their ultimate sacrifice. a stunning, strong write of memorial. BRAVO!
if anyone is offended, shame on them--we should never forget.
(((((HUGS))))) and i appreciate this more than you'll know
love, karla. :(
Debashish