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I have only three 9-11 poems in me. One is already on this site ("To an All-American family") and another deals with that day in light of some of the local police officers and firefighters I've had contact with during my career. This is the third.
Please don't be offended by this work, but like most of us, the only exposure we have to New York's public safety agencies come from the safety of our TV rooms.Using the taglines from some past television crime dramas, I put together this unlikely tribute to New York's Finest and Bravest as regards 9-11.

And in the Naked City,

on a day when three

thousand stories

came to a violent end,


When the third watch

roared to the Towers

and went in where others

fled, doing their job of

saving lives, where some

never came out.

Some gave all after

kissing little Harvey

goodbye for the last time.


Now we all weep and salute

with the words of paper heroes

for very real ones.

Along with those in

the Naked City,

Everybody loves ya, baby

You done good.   

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 Reviews of "Prime time"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
well said

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2005
"on a day when three
thousand stories
came to a violent end," i love the way you wrote this that is so true. Such a unique way to say that.

Steve, This is a very nice powerful tribute to all those on that tragic day. I don't know why you say it wouldn't be received well. This is so nice so real, honest and truthful, really gets the tears to flowing.,
"Some gave all after
kissing little Harvey
goodbye for the last time"
So true. Every line in this poem is sad and honorable. Very Very nice poem and tribute.
Tracey xoox(c :)42

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
Very powerful write!!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 11, 2004
Powerful piece Joos!!

A salto or a backflip of reality when so many hearts tumbled down!!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2004
Said very well.
Thanks for sharing.......

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
Steve,
This is powerful and
so well written...
Peggy

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
Yes Steve..they did do good. You managed to bring a tear to my eye, It's a day that I've personally vowed to never let be forgotten. The lives it ended and the lives it changed deserves to forever be remembered.
Thank you for this very sobering and touching write. Lisa

Reviewed on February 10, 2004
(((steve)))

yep--they done good. they gave their lives trying to save others...how many were saved because of their efforts? thousands more got out because of them--our brave firefighters, police officers and e.m.s. workers--kudos to them, and to you, for remembering their ultimate sacrifice. a stunning, strong write of memorial. BRAVO!

if anyone is offended, shame on them--we should never forget.

(((((HUGS))))) and i appreciate this more than you'll know

love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
Powerful poem reminding of the sad devastation, that shocked not only America but also every corner of this world..


Debashish


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