Not Allowed In Today (poem) by Rodney Evan Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

Oh, Rodney, hurts, this...as, I, well, know this, inside, all too well... and its so hard, at times to enter, when even the 'moon shuns...'
Your heart is so open, one could cry, you allow so many in and make them feel 'allowed in'...
so good to see you once more, been in a darkness and here, this and...
Oh, many
Thanks
m.

Reviewed by Jamie Gilcig (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2004

Hi Rodney. You've been there too. It's why I am so grateful to you amigo.

Thanks for everything.

Jamie

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on October 13, 2003

Sad my friend, I know the feeling though and you express yourself well. You'll always be let in here.

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Those days...we endure them.

Very well expressed, Rodney.

Gina

Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman

Reviewed on September 30, 2003

The theme seems equatible to a black hole, drawing in all light, and as it has been referred before, pulling back the seas.

I wonder why you chose not to utilize the first "As" in S3, It actually makes for more grammatical concisity.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on September 29, 2003

A sorrowful, soul-ful piece...woven as only you can weave. Beautiful...

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on September 29, 2003

If it were not for the darkness, would we then enjoy the light?
Love
Josie

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on September 29, 2003

I can feel the sadness in this piece. Some great lines here.

~Joseph

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

a state of limbo, excellently penned...

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

So profound, like the title also.

Nancy

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

Very profound depth.
Taylor

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott