~ A moment of aloness ~
Transformed into a moment
of loneliness
There was this single bud
waiting to open
under the first rays
of the sun
to show her center
Why did I think of it as she
I do not know
Maybe because it was closer
at that moment
than you could be
And when she opened
I entered her
wanting your scent
I felt very Zen
and no longer alone.
~~~
Alex Nodopaka Mar©2006
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Regis
ah, dammit-- how much felt, how much you brought me into this...
sigh..
that
'single bud'
('waiting to open...')
yes, that is Loneliness, much so, when even the sun will not shine, yet this
this
poem, Alex holds a depth of hope, and sir...yes, as Tinka spoke of-- you are a male, still...
you are also so very humanly naked here, allowing us to somehow sense and be within this
moment...
(I love it)
& i thank you for your kind words on my works, ah, wish i was writing again...
so Good to have found this, sigh...
indeed!
:)
m.
$*;*$
Love Tinka