My thoughts My thoughts. I'm so fed up with YOUR thoughts. NO EXCUSES should be made about you not being able to provide for your child this time.. Getting a job this time.. Because the OTHER man is holding you down? NO EXCUSES this time.No excuses for not being that man your son needs in his life, that father your daghter needs in her life DADDY's little girl remember? Not wanting a guy to do her wrong but you can't treat her MOM right.And for THAT mom I know YOUR mom didn't get her hair done before she got yours done. Or get her nails done before YOUR food was done. For YOU to eat. YOU spoke. The World listened. Your ticket with the face of OBAMA was given.. You've had years to prepare for your success.. Are you ready?? NO EXCUSES this time!
That's really great! I like the way the priorities are set in this piece especially message about parental love and being totally devoted to ones children. I like that part about doing the child's hair before hers. That takes me back in the days to when grandma's wouldn't eat before the children ate and they got up early in the morning just to make sure the whole family ate good. Very well written and keep the thoughts and streams flowing!
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Edwin