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Salvaging Time
by Carol J Grace → (All Poetry by Carol J Grace)
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Started this poem while in a hospital waiting room

 

Ten minutes slip into twenty,
twenty twines its way into thirty,
and time melts from Dali’s canvas
and settles into the cracks between
the pine planks on the living room floor.
 
We wait, because there is nothing
else for us to do.
We try (unsuccessfully) to scoop
up some of the minutes, but they are
rendered useless, polluted by the lint,
dirt and dog hair gathered there.
 
Warmth rides down on sun’s rays
and slips in through the blinds,
finding one corner first,
then reaching out farther
until we lay helpless and exposed
in the light of mid-morning’s truth, 
 
still seeking more minutes
since the ticking and tocking
has slowed to an unrecognizable
sound and the second hand jerks
in spasms, soon to move no more.

 


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 Reviews of "Salvaging Time"
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 30, 2009
Great write. The Dali canvas was a nice touch.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
So very true and you do justice to the emotions through your words...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on July 27, 2009
I've been there, more times than I can count. Well presented, Carol!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
TWO THINGS THAT WAIT FOR NO ONE; TIME AND TIDE. WE OFTEN WISH THAT TIME COULD WAIT, AS WE WATCH HELPLESSLY AND SEE IT...SLIPPING AWAY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
I like it good write :-)


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