Small is more appealing to me in my old age now. I do like to think small even. This is a good write, is presented in small 2 line saying and ach has to be taken literally as each person deems to nimslef the meaning.
Love the pic and hope you are enjoying what you portray. Every kind of environment has its pro/con so we just have to hope we find what suits us best and go with the flow;-)
I like this one Donna, reminds me of the sweet poetry of coffee houses of the sixties, the songs of our youth, and the hope of tomorrows in these quaint trappings your word images have painted.
Your poem reminded me very much of the Beatles song, "Strawberry Fields" It isn't fun if, at the end of the day, it doesn't seem worthwhile. I love your word usage.
Delightful title, and the image is to die for. Seems almost like a fairy-tale dwelling. The formatting and stumbling forward propulsion you create with your thought process in this is intriguing and clever. Well done! In your seventh verse I'm assuming you meant to use "obelisk"?
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Regis
an excellent tale/poetry style
very enjoyable
Love Tinka
Happy Easter,
Eileen
Be safe,
Karen
Exquisite!!!! A classic feel to this one; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
Your poem reminded me very much of the Beatles song, "Strawberry Fields" It isn't fun if, at the end of the day, it doesn't seem worthwhile. I love your word usage.
Delightful title, and the image is to die for. Seems almost like a fairy-tale dwelling. The formatting and stumbling forward propulsion you create with your thought process in this is intriguing and clever. Well done! In your seventh verse I'm assuming you meant to use "obelisk"?
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