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Good Bye
by Ankin Timourian → (All Poetry by Ankin Timourian)
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I thought I was in Shangri-la, but all was an imagination and beautiful mirage...


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I don’t know the reason why
You make me smile; sometimes
You make me cry.
When you are next to me
I fly through the seven layers high…
 
You can be the Golden Fish
Granting me my lifelong wish:
Dive together in the Ocean of Love.
 
Melting with each hug, moaning with each kiss
You made me believe that you have
The key that unlocks my innermost desires,
You made me believe that you know
The magic of an ancient, everlasting fire
That burns the skies and inspires
The souls, searching for True Love,
Searching for eternity in the Tibetan sky,
In Shangri-la…
 
You made me believe
That you know the secret formula
That can turn my blood into water,
That can turn me into a bloodthirsty Dracula,
It can vaporize my thoughts into a mist
To fall down as raindrops from a Nebula,
To soak us with other-worldly dreams.
 
To say that I will miss
The electricity that runs through your fingertips,
I’d like to kiss your silent lips.
 
The gentle energy that you create
Is the greatest bliss.
  
When imagination was fed with magical formula…
Fog covered the face of Reality and the Truth in Shangri-la.
 
Copyright © 2009
By Ankin Timourian

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2009
Hi Ankin
So long as we can still dream, that's the main thing. Look ever forward. Cheers, Liz

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 11, 2009
Ankin,
You instil and distil mystique and respect in this tribute to a place that set your heart and mind and soul on fire, and I envy you this great experience and occasion. This is beautifully rendered poetry and will last.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
This is very compelling and effective poetry, Ankin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Donald Tilley (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Ankie,

Sorry I missed your call last night. I was upstairs and didn't get back to the office until later in the night.

I really love this one! Just the sound of the words alone is powerful. I think my favorite stanza is "the magic of an ancient, everlasting fire - that burns the skies and inspires - the souls, searching for True Love, searching for eternity in the Tibetan sky -- In Shangri-la".

Talk to you later today. Got to go to the dentist for a root canal!

Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Beautifully penned and much enjoyed.

Reviewed by Anthony Wicher (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Beautiful poem. Even if the illusion of Shangri-la was not real, it was a beautiful fantasy.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
THEY WALKED...YOU FLEW. NOW, FLY ON... SWIFT AND SURE TO HIGHER PLACES, LADEN WITH THE BEAUTY OF LOVE...THAT YOU KNOW CAN BE...AND, HOW SAD...'THEY' WILL NEVER KNOW SUCH A TREASURE. THIS IS ONE VERY WELL WRITTEN POEM THAT WAS SO ENJOYED. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Maybe because being one of the gods in Machu Pichu that special god have the power to make you smile and to move you to tears, to make you to feel like thousand diamond or ethereal like a ghost.
A good bye will never broke the golden chain that make you his slave.
Love do such things to everyone.

Georg



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