Romancing in the Elevator (poem) by Ankin Timourian on AuthorsDen

Romancing in the Elevator
by Ankin Timourian → (All Poetry by Ankin Timourian)
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This poem is written per Sir Leonardo’s request Fantasizing an interesting heart pounding moment in the elevator with someone you adore and have romantic feelings towards each other. Never thought I can write something around this subject…
I carelessly entered into the elevator Someone else rushed into it too, O my God! …. it is you… It’s been centuries since last week I haven’t seen or touched you… We have only two minutes Behind the scenes to be together and be true … Anticipation of your fire Melting my essence is running through My veins and overcomes my mind Like a crazy, astral shower…. The hope of being hugged by you Stirs my heart with sweet desire… To quench my sensual thirst for you Seduction was my weapon… Spontaneity unbuttoned a pleasant view… You grabbed me by the waist And pulled me towards you… I loved the little roughness And your flowing, strong energy Coursing through my body; That moment only You and Me… Nothing matters except your luscious lips, Your stolen kiss I savor for an eternity… One minute left to reach to the top… With pounding hearts behind the iron doors We slide our burning hands under shirts and pants… And in between… To feel the warmth and softness of the skin… The lift might stop and someone might come in… Please open your eyes and wake up from this dream; The throbbing fear of being caught behind the scenes Is a thrilling part of the passionate love-making… By Ankin Timourian Copyright © 2009

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 5, 2009

THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS VIVID AND DONE VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on September 11, 2009

Ankin, I adored your poem and now for a VERY cold shower!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on September 3, 2009

Isn't it fun living in the moment? Just think how that blood pumping helps keep you healthy both mentally and physically. There is something about being caught that is very intoxicating. Well DONE!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Anthony Wicher (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2009

This gets me really hot. But it is more than a physical desire, it is a moment of true intimacy, a forbidden fruit illicitly snatched from a life of going to the office every day until one dies, whether of boredom or old age, whichever comes first.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Hope it wasn't one of those "elevators" that are express up and faster down!!!!! LOL

Georg

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

elevating ...

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

the perfect place for stolen love

Reviewed by Felix Perry

The thrill of getting caught has always driven passion and desire to umbellievable heights, whether it is a pulbic place or in another's bedroom...it heats up the lovemaking.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

passionate poem you wrote here!!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Love has its passionate moments in the minds eye or reality.