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The First Kiss
by Ankin Timourian → (All Poetry by Ankin Timourian)
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Long waited, life giving force, true and innocent First Kiss that will stay on a clean canvas of her soul forever … shining like a diamond star in a dark…
Two thirsty souls met by chance, Pulled towards each other By magical and magnetic power. Fueled by a burning desire to complete each other, They wished to explore the secrets of True Love. Embraced by the whisper of a gentle breeze, Near the peaceful lake, under the old maple tree, They merged into their first divine kiss… The kiss that caressed their lips, The kiss… That will be cherished for many, many years. Mellow and heart-stopping kiss Tried to wipe the raindrops off of their lips, Tried to taste the sweetness of her cherries, And after leaving behind fainting sensation With pleasant numbness, The drunken kiss tried to repeat itself With panting and wanting more To taste delicious liquor off of her lips. By kneeling in front of each other, on their knees, And by merging into each other’s breath, They stayed hypnotized in each other’s arms, They melt together while Eternity stopped the time, Overwhelmed by breathtaking, Electrifying wet dance of the kiss, They took a deep breath, Then phantasia brought them back, And by finalizing its act with long lasting bliss, Their quiet lips were sealed forever With an unforgettable and heartwarming, Invigorating kiss That was an outburst of hidden desire, As an unforeseen rainfall that showered their needs And trembled their whole essence By sending their senses Into the tranquility - serene place Where love pleads to be re-energized And comes back again with growing, sensual need… By Ankin Timourian Copyright © 2009

Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati

Reviewed on May 4, 2010

The drunken kiss tried to repeat itself
With panting and wanting more
To taste delicious liquor off of her lips." very beutiful imagery. In sex kiss plays an important role. It is the ambassador beteen two loving soul!

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on January 30, 2010

Your beautiful poem, bathed me in that delight once more, thank you for bringing back this everlasting feeling. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2010

WOW!. . .. ...!!!!!
Deborah

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on December 5, 2009

A stunning, unforgettable poem Ankin.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on December 4, 2009

You make me remember that first kiss in the forest, it tasted the wild strawberries we had been plucking and afterward we did a little of skinny dipping! (yes! that was an unforgettable first kiss!)

Georg

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on December 3, 2009

TRUE....IT ONLY TAKES ONE KISS OF LOVE TO START A SMOLDERING FIRE...WHICH EVENTUALLY ERUPTS INTO A BLAZE. THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS DONE WELL...SIZZLEING WITH PASSION AND...LOVE? THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Ankin this is perfect romance as best as it gets. Beautiful my friend.
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Reviewed by Cela Shearer

Just a gorgeous and sensually vivid piece.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Oh the anticipated first kiss! I love the way you built it up..nicely done Ankin. I have a special someone that I cannot wait to kiss for the first time, I know it will be explosive!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Bidwell

I'm afraid my first kiss did not measure up to this, but decades are but a moment as if it was yesterday- and it was that first lady who later showed my how it was done...as you describe.
Just memories.
Wonderful writing here, wonderful feelings.

John