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Broken
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Everything is broken. ******************************************************
Broken Broken flowers in the fields Littered across a sea of green Broken spears and broken shields Mark the place where the Warrior has been. Broken bones beneath the sod Spectral sighs come with the breeze Brave men die for some sacred God. In battle died some King to please. Broken Armor, broken Guns Litter the ground once again Broken Daughters, broken sons New bloods fertilize the grain. Battles fought across the years. For different Gods and different Kings Different mothers shedding tears Fearing what the next year brings. The shifting earth will cover all Evidence hidden from history�s eye The valley awaits the next trumpet call. New Battles fought new Battle cries. R A Spicer � July 28, 2004

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

This is great. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on July 31, 2004

Everything IS broken, Robin... Great cadence, it sets a sadly mad beat that pounds into the reader's mind, very strong.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on July 28, 2004

In brokenness, we have the chance to reattach, unify, and heal. Lovely remembrance. Thank you.

blessin's Robin,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 27, 2004

"Broken" breaks the indifference and depicts the journey of inJUSTICE. A WAKE UP CALL in a poetic magnificence.

Thank You for sharing Your treasures. I heard Your voice, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

To the point!
What a sad and tragic world.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

This is the first time I have read your poetry and I am impressed. These words will stay with me - always a sign of a successful write. Chanti

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

This is POWERFUL!