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Asleep With Man-Child Dreams
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Your profile lies upon my sheets in the full embrace of sleep
You lean into a fullness stretch then curl up like a leaf
My eyes sweep over your freckled flesh
Your chiseled nose and brow
I draw a sketch of you in dreams
You're that little boy right now
In every flinch of your nerves
I see a pirate bold
In battle with the mighty sea
Right off some distant shore
You fight just like a musketeer
With blades of steel... defiant
Then as you turn the morning sun
Morphs you again.... Prince Valiant
You're a royal then, a King Arthur
Out dreaming a new quest
In a whispered ache you speak a name
Dulcinea was suspect
I heard another echo then
In a yearning voice you said
"Hold up you windmill of a chance"
Then Quixote fought instead
With kisses placed here and there
I calmed your dream back down
Just as your face contorted
You became a circus clown
It was a three ring circus then
With dancing girls and elephants
Fire-eating dude and pigs that seemed indignant
My tender one of dreamland
King Arthur and the boys
In the dreams of a Braveheart man
Where masters played with toys
I love this tiny child in you
So I tuck you safe in bed
Lean down to kiss your eyelids shut
And caress your man/child head.


....Goodnight Gene, Roy, Cisco....Oh Pancho...;-)

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 Reviews of "Asleep With Man-Child Dreams"
Reviewed by Ted Roberts
Reviewed on April 15, 2010
Musketeers! Prince Valiant! King Arthur! Don Quixote! All you needed was to add Cyrano de Bergerac! I can see that you are well versed in the classics . . . I've enjoyed your composition, thanks for sharing . . . and keep up the swashbuckling lingo!

Ted Anthony Roberts
Swashbuckling Author

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on June 17, 2006
Susan, Susan, Susan...such a perfect poem. Blessed is the man who holds that boy/child within. I love it when I find this quality in a man, although some are reluctant to show it...but, I know I have a bit of that "never want to grow up" in me too.
Taylor ~

Reviewed on June 17, 2006
You paint such a vibrant portrait of your (lucky) man, Susan, it's hard to resist such beauty! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, and congratulations, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 17, 2006
Just one great piece of poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 17, 2006
Wonderful wonderful wonderful. This one I think is so true of all men and I must confess my dreams often take me on journeys and into roles that live on from my boyhood days. Susan it amazes me how will you know the essence of a man and seem to enter his very thoughts to do y our writes. This is a great man/child epic for sure.

Hugs,
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Susan this is so endearing and beautifully written! It put me in a loving mood for all "our little man/boys!";-) Very special, sis!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
"...My tender one of dreamland..."
Beautiful Susan. A gorgeous poem of love; seeing the child within! Let's celebrate the childlike spirit!
Love, Suzie xoxox :-)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
A mother's love for her child envisions many wonderful dreams for one so dear to her heart.


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