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Wounded GIrl
by Brittany Renée → (All Poetry by Brittany Renée)
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Bear in mind - this is raw. No substantial poetic fundamentals in here except emotion and therapy :-)

Broken in my wounds,
obsessed in my dreams,
do I scare you away
with my tears and screams?

You find me paralyzed
deep in memories.
Are you strong enough
to hear the fallacies?

Blood stained by tears;
this is your test.
My wounds are deep.
Can you put them to rest?

I find myself in a fantasy -
a life prolonged with you.
Will you abandon the weak
deny what is so true ?

Drowning in your eyes;
eased, cuddled, pacified.
Deep in a different realm.
With me are you satisfied?

Keep away the distance
bring me into your world.
Are you strong enough to save me?
Have you room for a wounded girl?

(C) 2007 Brittany Renée

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 Reviews of "Wounded GIrl"
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on July 1, 2007
Oh, raw or not - this is phenomenal! You are becoming quite the seasoned poet. Keep writing from that wonderful heart of yours -- that is the only truth that matters. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on June 3, 2007
I stumbled upon this quite by accident but am so glad I did. I am such a haphazard member of this site but I love coming in when I have the time to read the works of my fellow members. What a lovely eloquent write this is. It touched me so deeply.
Chanti

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 1, 2007
ah my friend...poetry, at least in this man's book,is much more about substance than form...This piece of yours is indeed poetry...raw, jagged emotion, anguish, pain...a soul cry in which can be seen...every so slightly, a glimmer of hope.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2007
Enjoyed very much...Hugssss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
We all enter into relationships with baggage, just a part of life. Interesting write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Brittany, you paint such a scene...the despair of a human crushed and reaching out in need of caring and love and trust...but with so many questions woven into the personality of the one she reaaches out to. So nice to see your work again.
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
I could hear this put to music, Brittany. While deep and moving, this poem is also well-constructed and beautiful. Thanks, Jill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
This is powerfully emotive and meaningful, Brittany Renée; most compelling. Blessings of love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Stunning write for sure from one so young but wise in feelings and how to express them. This write strikes all the right chords and the reader can feel the pain and uncertatinty of the writers heart. She cries for confirmation and reassurance and it is a legitamate cry for help. Very well done Brittany and welcome back.

Fee


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