Oh, raw or not - this is phenomenal! You are becoming quite the seasoned poet. Keep writing from that wonderful heart of yours -- that is the only truth that matters. -- Jeff
I stumbled upon this quite by accident but am so glad I did. I am such a haphazard member of this site but I love coming in when I have the time to read the works of my fellow members. What a lovely eloquent write this is. It touched me so deeply.
Chanti
ah my friend...poetry, at least in this man's book,is much more about substance than form...This piece of yours is indeed poetry...raw, jagged emotion, anguish, pain...a soul cry in which can be seen...every so slightly, a glimmer of hope.
Brittany, you paint such a scene...the despair of a human crushed and reaching out in need of caring and love and trust...but with so many questions woven into the personality of the one she reaaches out to. So nice to see your work again.
Love, Taylor
Stunning write for sure from one so young but wise in feelings and how to express them. This write strikes all the right chords and the reader can feel the pain and uncertatinty of the writers heart. She cries for confirmation and reassurance and it is a legitamate cry for help. Very well done Brittany and welcome back.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Chanti
Be safe,
Karen
Love, Taylor
Regis
Fee