"Harlequin precipitation"; "Moss and vine foundation" -- fantastic imagery (and I mean fantastic in both senses of the word: fantasy-like and wonderful). A terrific piece. Beautifully written.
Reviewed by Eddie Arce (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Hey stranger it's been a while. See you still got it!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
Nice to read you again, Brittany! Your poetry is blossoming. I really love "dreamland’s dreidel". Well done, Poet!
The edge of temptation meets the edge of changing the definition of one's self and self image.
Great structure, rhyming the first words of each stanza, drawing the stanzas together externally in that way while mainting the internal rhymes of each individual stanza.
Like everyone else said: some things are worth waiting for.
J.
damned if you do; damned if you don't. this has the definite feel of frustration. you pique quite well. your imagery is, to me, a storm that is brewing, waiting to break. nicely crafted in form, flow and message. -- Jeff
Brittany Renee,
The last three lines of this poem say it all. I agree with the latter and would take the "blessed" route.
Thanks for this beautiful, thought provoking poem.
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
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Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Be safe,
Karen
Great structure, rhyming the first words of each stanza, drawing the stanzas together externally in that way while mainting the internal rhymes of each individual stanza.
Like everyone else said: some things are worth waiting for.
J.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The last three lines of this poem say it all. I agree with the latter and would take the "blessed" route.
Thanks for this beautiful, thought provoking poem.
Jill
The fellow poet with Oak Hill, OH roots