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My own internal patience
by Dean Fraser-Phillips → (All Poetry by Dean Fraser-Phillips)
Sunday, October 23, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poem about people telling you who are you are and what you should be in life but in reality the only that person who knows you is you.


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 Wake up in the morning

My reflection staring back at me

The person I know so best

Yet the least I cannot see

 

Lines around me eyes

Wrinkles from the smile

Projected shadow of the past

Walks with me each mile

 

Some say that they know me

Yet who just I cannot trust

When the tears I’ve shed

Erode the heart to rust

 

Who Am I?

Who are you to judge?

For everything you don’t know

This is just my grudge

 

Advice is given often

Yet it bounces in the ears

Fake smile and nods of heads

Mechanical for years

 

Lines around me eyes

Wrinkles from the smile

Projected shadow of the past

Walks with me each mile

 

For there is only one who knows me

The one I cannot test

My personal reflection

The one that I trust best

 

For everyone is a voice

Yet that’s the difference

My voice is internal

The perfect patience

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "My own internal patience"
Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on October 27, 2022
I like this piece even though it brings a sense of sadness to my heart.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on October 25, 2022
ahh i love this especially the lines everyone is a voice, my voice is internal. thank you for writing this. i have enjoyed your beautiful piece.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 24, 2022
A perfect poem for making sure that we love ourselves first. That mirror may tell us that we are changing physically, but it's the attitude that needs to be freed from doubt. The more we open up to the possibilities as we change, the better off we are.

Thanks for reminding all of us who are aging. In my case, well beyond what I thought I ever would.

Ron


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