the first day was a quiet day
as birds learned to sing;
things were churned out
of divine silent production lines;
creature factories painted the sky
with soft vapors becoming clouds;
later that night
when the creatures learned to hump
the jungle became a marvel --
a symphony of slithering
predators discovering their voices.
the second day was the eon
of earth and learning
as eyes began to recognize shapes
and shapes began to make sense
-- it was also the era
when the overcrowding began:
with baby creatures under
every turning blowing leaf,
and a sudden need for an
ungodly amount of food.
And the machine began to run and all of life changed and evolved into a huge garbage pit that we, today, call Earth. This is a most entertaining write, Scott. You give the reader just enough information for us to go on and write the rest of the story in our own minds. I really liked this!
Take care,
Sherry
Take care,
Sherry