Silent Waves (poem) by Erica Ivory on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by melbalyn baang (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2004

hi there, you have a beautiful poem.it has rhym and meaning.

Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

You hooked me with the phrase "from waters edge to oceans deep, these silent waves shall never sleep." Simply powerful! My sincere compliments on a fine piece of writing!

Best Wishes,
Chuckie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Absolutely mesmerising and captivating, like the ebb and flow of waves themselves. Excellent poetry which is soothing and haunting at the same time. Quite hypnotic! Could easily be swept away by such tides... "If water is the blood of life... We live upon a surgeons knife..." powerful metaphor and imagery! Loved this, Erica. Thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Oh Erica you certainly haven't lost your touch..you improve with every piece...bravo!

vesna :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

lovely poetry!

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

great poem Erica!!

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

well written...well said

Reviewed by Kathy Kubik

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Hi Erica,

This is just lovely. I enjoyed your words and imagery -

Kathy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Love Photo- To Tempt Fate Disaster- To Accept Your Fate_REWARD!

Romantic Sad Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

James wanna hook now?

On top form, Of what susan speaks, went there on a cruise for my honeymoon, Europe is great for thise of a fertile mind.ENGLAND, being the best-est.

Good point yanky doodle land don't seem to have much in the way of myths, legends, fables. ..

Reviewed by James Daniels

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Wow! Good read, must give you a hand for this one!!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Beautiful Erica!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

What beautiful descriptive words, so artistically arranged to produce a poetic masterpiece.
Lovely!
Chanti

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

This reminds me of Lorelei near Franfurt Germany. She is the siren of the Rhine river. Myths explode from facts I think. It just depends on how creative the witness can get. Your poem is soft and tender and well written. Reminds me too of Hans Christian Anderson's "Little Mermaid". I visited all those statues with their legends/myths when I lived in Europe. I wonder why here in the states we don't have our own sirens??
much enjoyed!
Susan