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Venus and Mars
by Andy James Turner → (All Poetry by Andy James Turner)
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I woke up this morning and this was in my head.


Give me your heart precious woman
I won’t pretend, it’s something I’ll mend
My love is here for the taking
We can collide
Venus and Mars

You feel your heart will remain broken
Give me your heart; I’ll give you my word
And your lonely, loneliness will simply depart
Venus and Mars

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 Reviews of "Venus and Mars"
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 30, 2026
The sheer simplicity, its what every Venus and Mars need.
Cdp xoxo

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on April 29, 2011
Magical thoughts of a mythical path...come to mind, reading your poem, Andy...the heart of a Leo constallation, beating for Venus and Mars renewal of love.

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 2, 2011
Touching ...Venus and Mars go together...M

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
SOUNDS WONDERFUL...AS AS LONG AS BOTH HONOR THEIR COMMITMENT TO ONE ANOTHER...VENUS AND MARS WILL DO JUST FINE. WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 27, 2011
Oh, Andy!

The simplicity and clarity make the heartbreak

almost unbearable.

Venus and Mars. . .y e s !!

xOx Phyllis xOx

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 27, 2011
Well Penned James
thanks for sharing
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on March 20, 2011
A touching side to your writing, Andy. Beautifully penned:)
Sheila

Reviewed on March 16, 2011
A beautiful Collision Andy.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
Lovely indeed dear man..Hugsss

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
Enjoyable read, Andy

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
Awesome writing, Andy.


Tony

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 14, 2011
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
lovely work, Andy ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Andy, This is a beautiful vow, a collision meant to be~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Love is so immeasureable, one cannot ever figure out why one can feel so deeply but it is wonderful..As is this poem.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Nice way to wake up, Andy, with love on your lips. -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Perfectly said, Andy.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Give me your heart; I’ll give you my word
And your lonely, loneliness will simply depart

Fine sentiments well shared, Andy. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
What a lucky woman Andy!!!
You certainly know how to wind a girl xxx!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Nice piece of work, Andy. Very well done.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
... are alright tonight! :)) Sir Paul would be proud - glad you got this outta your head and onto the page. A touch of the Roy Orbison's too. You do dark glasses well. xx

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on March 13, 2011
Love this Andy. Thanks. Written so well and from the heart.

With Love,
Cindy


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