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I miss you
by Jacqueline Hallenbeck → (All Poetry by Jacqueline Hallenbeck)
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I miss you.

I keep aiming at you
and I miss you;
with a dart, with my car,
yet I miss you;
with a knife, once or twice
and still I miss you.

I won't give up,
I will not stop
till I miss you
no more.

(c) jh


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 Reviews of "I miss you"
Reviewed by Dennis Domrzalski
Reviewed on March 31, 2010
I like it.
JUst hope you don't wind up missing me.


Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2010
I cannot help my dodging ... for some reason! I do like the way you hook or ensnare--verrrry trrricky!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 16, 2010
Giggle....not what I thought it was going to be....clever write, and funny too.

Anna

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
A sobering (hopefully tongue-in-cheek) perspective, Jacqueline. I appreciate your sense of humor. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
She chuckles. You are quite the wit, J.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 18, 2010
Yeah, I just thank god that women are such bad shots.

I am so missed, in the same way. lol.

I love the dark humour here, it's bloody unique. Or if not unique then dreadfully frightening.

The kinda lass one will say, want to go for dinner, don't call me. i'll call you... as if... lol


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