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Looking For The Ocean In A Girl's Eyes
by Sherry Bach → (All Poetry by Sherry Bach)
Saturday, January 10, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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My Facebook friends have chosen 19 topics for me to write 19 poems and I'm doing it in 19 days. This is #7 of 19 and one of my favorites so far. A sonnet. Form inspired by William Shakespeare.


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 Looking For The Ocean In A Girl's Eyes © 1.10.15 Sherry Bach

#7 of 19 - Topic Suggested By Jeff Yarbrough

 

He looked and he stared but he couldn't find

Any of the things she said was there

The colors of the ocean, a moment in time

All eluded him, it wasn't fair

Unaware of the mistake that he made

Until it was way too late

Realizing now that he'd been played

She had him, he'd taken the bait

He should have seen and known better

In hindsight it's all very clear

But now he's become her lover and debtor

Unable to escape from the power of fear

To look for the ocean in someone's eyes

Was his biggest mistake and his ultimate demise

 


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 Reviews of "Looking For The Ocean In A Girl's Eyes"
Reviewed by Sherry Bach
Reviewed on January 16, 2015
Yes indeed. Thank you.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
Interesting twist in this poetic piece. Makes one think twice! Well done Sherry. Ten stars!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 10, 2015
The eyes are certainly reflective of the personality. The ocean tends to turn stormy quite easily.

Ron


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