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Weeknight
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Weeknight

Dishes in the sink and grease on the stove.
His voice, high-pitched and helpless.
Love gets lost, even as the rains subside.


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 Reviews of "Weeknight"
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2003
Much said in these three lines. Hope the weekends are more cheerful. Very nicely done!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
It is nice.

Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
A well chosen few words !!!

Candida

Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2003
I like it a lot! Pathos reduced to a few words-where it belongs. Thank you- Jerry

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
Marvelous !

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 5, 2003
Exceptional!

Reviewed by Kevin Whitworth
Reviewed on December 25, 2002
Ahhh . . . There's nothing quite like a domesticated life.

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on December 20, 2002
been there, done that ...

good write!

john+

Reviewed by Sandy Forbes (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2002
Short and brilliant! This poem brings to mind a husband and wife trying to have a romantic evening and the sound of their baby crying puts a damper on the moment.


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