Exquisitely composed, and poetically expressed... "He heard the music" is a poetic flower from the Poet's ontological garden, suffusing scent of submlimity.
A vivid portrayal and very poignant, dear Bhuwan. As in life, so is he in death - a joy to be with and delighted in by the gods. Your lines touch my heart:
He heard the music
and followed it
all the way
to the Heaven
... the gentle pause and pace of this is both engaging and respectful.
He’d moved in
up the street from us
and is looking at us
through the windows
of his soul.
Again, the space gives such a moving account of his removal and transition between physical and heavenly states. So beautiful!
I'm so happy to see you here again. I hope things are well with you and with those you love and care for. Kate xx
You handle this passing with calm and dignity
and a wry sense of humour; i like your approach
and take, Bhuwan;
it's good to read you again, it's been a while,
too long really
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Healthy blissful creative life, Poet!
In respect and appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
He heard the music
and followed it
all the way
to the Heaven
... the gentle pause and pace of this is both engaging and respectful.
He’d moved in
up the street from us
and is looking at us
through the windows
of his soul.
Again, the space gives such a moving account of his removal and transition between physical and heavenly states. So beautiful!
I'm so happy to see you here again. I hope things are well with you and with those you love and care for. Kate xx
and a wry sense of humour; i like your approach
and take, Bhuwan;
it's good to read you again, it's been a while,
too long really
take the best care
john
Ron
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
William