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Threnody VIII by John Kohanovski -- a translation
by Teresa Pelka → (All Poetry by Teresa Pelka)
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Ruthless the vacuity you have made of my abode,

Dear Orsula mine, with this disappearing of yours.

We are plenty, and there is as nobody around:

Such a wealth has departed with a baby soul one.

As you ever and again spoke, so you also sang;

All corners in the house, you always merrily ran;

Never did you let your mother feel worry or trouble,

Or father waste his head in excess mentating pother;

This or that one, together gracefully embracing,

With that smile witty on your face, entertaining.

Now all is silence, a home become empties profound,

There is no littlun play, there is no laugh to resound,

Every corner, man is breathing a piercing sad,

In its sweetling child seeks comfort in vain, the pained heart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Threnody VIII by John Kohanovski -- a translation"
Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on September 1, 2014
The fathers sad reminiscence of his little girl and the joy that filled the now empty spaces. This speaks volumes to the parents sadness now that they're daughter is all grownup and gone. Not having children of my own, I can nevertheless sense the wish not expressed. That child will beget child and they may once again vicariously experience that joy at times. Wonderful translation of such a great, and to us, unknown poet. I hope there are more. Bob

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 1, 2014
This is truly a masterpiece. I'm sure it lost something in translation. While I never had children, I recall a period where I faced an empty house for a few years and it's not a pleasant feeling.

Ron

Reviewed by Teresa Pelka
Reviewed on September 1, 2014
.John Domino

Thank you very much! This is what I wanted to render in Kohanovsky's poetry -- opinions on it mostly relied on vowel count, and I thought he was very emotional, though, obviously, also a master of his tongue. :)

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on August 31, 2014
Very emotional piece of poetry here. Well done Teresa!


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